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We Do Not Write About (What We Do Not Know)
Contributed by
faithmairee
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Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:23:52 PM in AEST
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we do not write about
what we do not know
the so-called visionaries
in a frantic world
savoring chances taken
mourning lost opportunities
advancing with unmatched passion
a mere reflection of our double-life
we do not write about
what we do not know
but of the esoteric
world inside our heads
of displaced bullets
or the bothersome sometimes
bullheaded black holes in our souls
we do not write about
what we do not know
but of pain and suffering
or pleasure (possibly pure ecstacy)
and sometimes someone listens
to the stirrings of our soul
Copyright ©
faithmairee
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2004-02-11 19:23:52] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: We Do Not Write About (What We Do Not Know)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chrissylee on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:33:32 PM AEST (User
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our souls are the visions of our hearts and the way we feel just as you have placed these words here about all of us that write on this site... well done. |
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Re: We Do Not Write About (What We Do Not Know)
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:49:15 PM AEST (User
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Excellent, very well done. One has to walk the walk before writting it. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: We Do Not Write About (What We Do Not Know)
(User Rating: 1 ) by PoeticRequiem on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 09:40:31 PM AEST (User
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Well let me say that I am honored as a fellow poet that I am honored to be payed homage to by you, this is a great write and believe me I dont hand out compliments to every far flung rhyme or meter that comes my way so sincerely a good poem I enjoyed quite well thanks- PoeticRequiem (The Wordsmith) |
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Re: We Do Not Write About (What We Do Not Know)
(User Rating: 1 ) by EternitysLyre on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 04:57:25 AM AEST (User
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I do. I write about lots of things I don't know. But in the very same sense I know them without ever experiencing them--why would I, when I have a world full of annals for me to refer to? The archives of poetry make all we ever need, recording every figure and form into vibrant terminology.
Well said.
"Ephemeral dreams and perpetual ire; melodious lies from eternity's lyre."
~The Palatine Poet |
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Re: We Do Not Write About (What We Do Not Know)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lionel on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 05:21:27 PM AEST (User
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Thats good, but it would be better set to rhyme. Don't you like poetry that rhymes?
I do. |
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Re: We Do Not Write About (What We Do Not Know)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lionel on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 05:22:37 PM AEST (User
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Thats good, but it would be better set to rhyme. Don't you like poetry that rhymes? |
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