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Older Men
Contributed by
LaurenShields
on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:16:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I am given to the risk of the unknown,
To the excitement of illegality,
To the older man with wise eyes,
Who knows what he is after,
And is not afraid to ask it of me.
A chance,
A fight,
A question of the end result,
With no answer in sight,
Adventure,
Wonder,
Sensuality rolling gallantly like growling thunder,
Into my body from a smoking gun,
Speeding like the devil,
Taking his chances in heaven.
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LaurenShields
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2004-02-11 19:16:32]
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Re: Older Men
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by Chrissylee on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:40:50 PM AEST
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| short but very well written and i tend to agree...well done |
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Re: Older Men
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:43:34 PM AEST
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| Beautiful and well thougt out. Heavens grace must never be misplaced or wasted on a moment gone. Thank you for sharing. Look forward to more. |
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Re: Older Men
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by faithmairee on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:47:42 PM AEST
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| intriguing poem...i like the way it flows...nice presentation, too...very nice job! |
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