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lost time
Contributed by
fallen_eyes
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Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 04:29:43 PM in AEST
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Time passes by, slipping through my fingers
No idea how to hold it tight within my grasp
Losing all control over my reality
Slipping further into your fantasy
How do i stop the clock one more time?
Just to have that moment back again
Nothing seems to be the same when your here
Wondering over my body spreads your touch
Simple exploitation seems to be the key
For your unexplained curiosity
When will you give me a simple answer
As to what exactly you are after
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fallen_eyes
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2004-02-11 16:29:43]
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Re: lost time
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by forever_lonely on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 04:46:24 PM AEST
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aww hun so sweet great write hehe
luv luke x |
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Re: lost time
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:34:01 PM AEST
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So much pain and frustration, written in this poem, you really know how to use words to express your feelings, I loved the first verses because I can easily relate to them. Keep writing never loose hope. Great write
Anne :D |
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Re: lost time
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:43:00 PM AEST
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| You have done an incredible job expressing your emotions to the reader. I really liked this one alot. Kie |
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Re: lost time
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 09:48:07 PM AEST
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tis time to search within to the heart of you ...much talent I see here...we can not look to others for our happiness we must find it for ourselves...I believe you will do just fine
Shari |
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Re: lost time
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by poetrygodslove on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 06:32:29 AM AEST
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| Now If I could write like this..short . simple and right to the point. If you look at mine they are very long cause I dont know how to say what I want to say in a small space.. how do you do it... I like how you express yourself and I can understand you. I dont like to read poetry I cannot understand. good write..sandy |
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