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THE LIGHT WENT OUT
Contributed by
rie
on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 02:41:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The warmth in my face
The smile in my heart
My love for you
So open and true
The pain the loss
The fear the the wear
My love for you
Still so open and true
The cold in your face
The cold in your stare
My love for you
Is at a loss
The light went out
The light went out
My love for you
Lost
Copyright ©
rie
... [
2004-02-11 14:41:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: THE LIGHT WENT OUT
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:18:35 AM AEST (User
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I like the structure of this poem. Very well written.
Kimberly :) |
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