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Daisy Chain
Contributed by
merry
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Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 01:54:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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chain of fools
or pretty flowers
now we talk for endless hours
share our sorrows and our woes
laugh and giggle about who knows
what foolishness tickles us
and binds us closer than before
through such turmoil we have come
each and every single one
with a story of her own
written in the form of poems
we say what is on our minds
and in our hearts, such fragile parts
often broken, but ever hopeful
that someday true love comes
round the corner like the sun
after a dark and stormy night
you just wait and see, i'm right
but til then we have each other
to whine and complain, to give hugs
we understand so perfectly
the needs and wants and dreams
we all share in love it seems
such an ethereal thing it is
the heart so willing to take a chance
in sweet verses of romance
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gmm 2004
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-02-11 13:54:16]
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Re: Daisy Chain
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by Lionel on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 03:41:24 PM AEST
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| Seems like you have a very good friend. Good poem. |
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Re: Daisy Chain
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 04:03:17 PM AEST
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I agree with you merry! :D This poem is wonderful! Full of happiness I loved it ! The wording is very true great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Daisy Chain
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 04:22:46 PM AEST
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oh gaille, i love this poem, so beautifully written by your insighful heart, mind and soul, i think youve covered all the important aspects of friendship here, im so happy we are friends, for you brighten my world:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Daisy Chain
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 05:20:39 PM AEST
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| From the title (great by the way) to the ending I smiled and I could so relate. Kie |
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Re: Daisy Chain
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 05:29:04 PM AEST
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| I think you plucked the words right out of my mind ... perfectly perfect ... beautifully written ... hugs Jan |
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Re: Daisy Chain
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 06:41:49 PM AEST
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Daisy Chain....hehehe...more like a pack of wolves if ya ask me...lmao I still love ya all anyway :oP
Roses :o)
Larry |
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Re: Daisy Chain
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 08:04:49 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem Merry... :) |
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