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Haiku VI
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 12:01:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Morning mist rising
Covering base of mountain
Day has many clouds
Waterfall tumbles
Down verdant green terraced slope.
Sparkling in the sun
Rugged canyon sides
Shadows and sun play its depths
So massive and deep
Flowers hanging heads
Over fast moving streamlet
Spray waters faces
Bubbling brook runs fast
Among trees and forest glade
Washes rocks and sings
Threatening grey clouds
A monsoon begins its day
Island awaits rain
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2004-02-11 12:01:07]
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Re: Haiku VI
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 04:26:45 PM AEST
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| This I like. Visually, very appealing. Thanks for sharing it. |
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Re: Haiku VI
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 04:55:42 PM AEST
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| The imagery amazing! Awesome write. Kie |
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Re: Haiku VI
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 01:25:17 AM AEST
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Hi ramfire,
very good i hope you injoy your self.while on this island.
the way you discribe it is beautiful. |
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Re: Haiku VI
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:18:40 PM AEST
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| This is very vivid. I loved it. Beautifully written. *S* Cynthia |
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