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floating in the dark
Contributed by
fallen_eyes
on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 05:26:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As I dream of your lips floating down my neck
I know I shall no longer have you to depend
for the times when i could turn to you
Have disappeared like my dream will too
With one caress of your silky soft skin
I now realise what I shall soon be missing
Having you here makes the world seem right
Never leave me in the dark with only candle light
Feeling your hands take a hold of me
Helps me establish how things should be
For I know that always we're together
As friends from now until forever
Copyright ©
fallen_eyes
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2004-02-11 05:26:07]
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Re: floating in the dark
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by forever_lonely on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 11:26:05 AM AEST
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really sweet hun
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Re: floating in the dark
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 04:24:35 PM AEST
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| Beautiful....Kie |
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Re: floating in the dark
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:37:27 PM AEST
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Wow! Another beautiful poem! Hey I wasn't mistaken when I said you have great talent! Its very sad when the relationship with someone special ends, I know what it means but at least you'll remain friends and that's a good thing. Keep it up, and keep strong.
Anne :D |
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Re: floating in the dark
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by poetrygodslove on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 06:34:26 AM AEST
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| aweee... sounds to good to be just friends.. wish things could work out .. short again and right to the point ..i like it very much.. sandy |
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