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Second Best
Contributed by
Ash
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Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 03:15:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Adoring and Abhorring
I知 perplexed and confused
Furious and Delirious
I Want to be Everything to You
I知 Second Best
No more, no less
I want your happiness
And you want it too
Loving and Suffering
I知 pushing and shoving
Corroded and Exploded
I Rejected Everyone for You
I知 Second Best
No more, no less
I want your happiness
And you want it too
Praising and Bereaving
You don稚 want me and you do
Mistaken and Forsaken
I Sacrificed my Self-Respect for You
I知 Second Best
No more, no less
I want your happiness
And you want it too
Detonated, Replicated
Thrown away and then
Relieved and Deceived
I Lost Your Heart again
I知 Second Best
No more, no less
I want your happiness
And you want it too
Copyright ﾂｩ
Ash
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2004-02-11 03:15:51]
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Re: Second Best
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 05:04:08 AM AEST
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| ah these are always tuff feelings i know. the words came together to make a poem that just ozzed confussion and hurt you could see it came from the heart and your feelings are very deep. i hope things get better. |
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Re: Second Best
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 04:14:56 PM AEST
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| First let me say your poem was really good. The hurt just called out to me. I think your first rate, not second best. Hang in there with the rest of us. Kie |
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