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The Color Line
Contributed by
jaavys
on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 01:53:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I know there is a boundary
A line that I can't cross
My heart is in a quandary
It cannot bear the loss
It is the color line
That keeps me from my prayer
I wouldn't need a sign
If my true love was fair
And I can have her in a dream
A sin that I can scheme
I cross the color line
She's nowhere to be seen
When I awake I see her still
So I consume the wine
No help in this betrayal
I'm just a valentine
The heart betrays
It looks and stays
Her heart is not aware
That once, she was a prayer
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jaavys
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2004-02-11 01:53:14]
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Re: The Color Line
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by subnet_spider on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 01:58:25 AM AEST
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Good write. I can greatly relate to what you saying, except for the prayer part, there is no god for me, not anymore....
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Re: The Color Line
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 02:03:29 AM AEST
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| very good poem, and very touching keep it up ok ? |
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Re: The Color Line
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 05:10:53 AM AEST
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| i feel very much like this. i liked your poem alot its nice you apreciate just how lucky you are i hope she apreciates you too. |
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Re: The Color Line
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 04:03:56 PM AEST
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| This was a very interesting poem. Keep up the good work! Kie |
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