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Take A Breath
Contributed by
Yodo
on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 11:57:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Following you as you're lead to your death
Knowing you'll only get one last breath
Looking upon you
You've become a statue
All in the space of a breath
Holding you down as they push the syringe
Seeing the fluid, I began to cringe
Watching you die
I can't help but cry
Crying to God under breath
And I can't
Hear
My breathing
I can't feel my face
All
I
Know is you're gone
I can't come up for a breath.
Copyright ©
Yodo
... [
2004-02-10 23:57:58]
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Re: Take A Breath
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by brokenmoon on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 12:44:15 AM AEST
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| although i'm not familiar with this style, i can say that the emotion came through very strongly and put me in that very room as though i were facing it too. |
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Re: Take A Breath
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 10:55:50 AM AEST
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| Oh gosh, this made me cry. I am so sorry for your loss. Kie |
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Re: Take A Breath
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 03:41:04 AM AEST
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oooooh, dearest yodo, im so sorry for your loss, ive lost many furkids myself, my heart goes out to you, now your friend has joined mine on rainbow bridge and someday we will see them again, its like time is standing still, hang in there, this is a beautiful tribute, big hugs n' love nessa
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