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The Rose
Contributed by
evryrose
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Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 09:02:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Look inside....
The floor covered in rose petals
A trail of passion
As the smell of them crushing beneath my feet rises
To meet my nose
The bed...
Layered in silk
Waiting to be unfolded by steady hands
The dresser...
With a single rose lying on its wooden Surface
Merely lying, the petals, leaves, and the
THORNS
Something so soft and beautiful in the pale glow of the Moonlight
With something so sharp it could cut, tear
Draw blood
Stain your hands the color of its fleshy petals
Scarlet veiling white
Pain overshadowing happiness
Copyright ©
evryrose
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2004-02-10 21:02:54]
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Re: The Rose
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by harshreality on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 10:11:25 PM AEST
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| I liked the analogy. Very fitting. I loved this!!! I could see it vividly |
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Re: The Rose
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by brokenmoon on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 12:54:41 AM AEST
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| nice.... very nice. good job |
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