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I Love You
Contributed by
hawaii06
on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 07:57:43 PM in AEST
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I never thought I’d say this,
But it’s true.
I love you.
When I saw you go,
I could only move slow.
I moped around all day,
I didn’t know what to say.
I love you.
I knew it was true,
As soon as I saw you.
This is the last time,
I’ll be saying bye.
Now, I can’t believe you’re gone.
I just want to know.
Why it had to be you.
I just wanted to let you know,
I love you.
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2004-02-10 19:57:43]
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Re: I Love You
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by Jacktripper on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 08:05:44 PM AEST
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| Sometimes poetry works so powerfully with such few words... "now I can't believe your gone..I just want to know..>Why it had to be you" It just makes you stop and think what must go through a childs mind. Great write .. |
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Re: I Love You
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by whisper-of-night on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 09:11:14 PM AEST
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| Oh god I can truly relate to your feeling toward your gran, mine used to loves me so much, kept all the best foods and sweets for me, pretected me when I annoyed my parent, comfort me when I sad or mad, but still, at the end, she goes..... what a shame our love ones have to go! v_v |
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