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Friends
Contributed by
hawaii06
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Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 07:56:02 PM in AEST
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We were friends,
Whatever happened?
I want to know
We said we were best friends,
Best friends till the end.
But I guess at that time,
We didn’t know what true friends were.
I mean look at us now,
So far apart,
I didn’t really want a new start.
We were friends,
Whatever happened?
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Re: Friends
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by Jacktripper on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 08:09:02 PM AEST
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| You capture the audience with your opening line... But what happened to make you not be friends? Those details would help us relate to your feelings more and bring the poem to reality. It's nicely phrased and the last line is intense..."We were friends, Whatever happened?" |
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Re: Friends
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by whisper-of-night on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 08:43:21 PM AEST
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Do not think too much!!! He is still your friend! I am so sure of it! Don't worry!
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