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Oceanic Fantasy
Contributed by
LaurenShields
on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 07:26:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Seaside symphonies,
Salt-water cries,
Waves crash into me,
Innocence dies.
This crownless king and jezebel queen,
Rest among the shrines and worthless rings.
Ghosts of our youth,
Fantasies of the past,
Who's to say they've not to last?
Sunlit kisses,
Sand-covered bodies,
Doused in riches,
And sensual glories,
Forsaken duties of righteous ones,
Blessed intimacy with a smoking gun,
Photographed time,
But it hasn't yet occurred,
Images of the mind,
In my depths still burn.
Copyright ©
LaurenShields
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2004-02-10 19:26:24]
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Re: Oceanic Fantasy
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 09:13:28 PM AEST
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| This was a very pleasant read. I love to daydream in class... |
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Re: Oceanic Fantasy
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by arden on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 05:36:22 PM AEST
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awesome write, keep it up, id like to see more of your stuff.
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Re: Oceanic Fantasy
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by Lilly-Quill on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 04:23:05 PM AEST
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~*LaurenShields*~
Some poems amuse us, some poems are grand, other so inspire us to aspire to a higher land...
"Seaside symphonies" is my favourite phrase, of this oceanic masterpiece. Thanks for sharing.
Regards,
~Lilly-Quill |
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