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Answers to questions not asked
Contributed by
kellros
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Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 01:56:00 PM in AEST
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I hear the voice of angels singing
and i wonder where i had gone wrong...
the life i was given,
was taken from me.
No pleasure, no relaxation,
stressful lifestyles, lies, pain and suffering.
I think to myself,
where has the world gone wrong.
The answer lies in the question,
what world?
Physical, or the little realities
everyone of us live in?
Pain is inevitable,
why is blood red?
Tears of blood run down my face,
just to find the world isn't what it used to be.
Sighing sitting in my room,
i've come to the conclusion...
there is no world,
just what you want it to be
Copyright ©
kellros
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2004-02-10 13:56:00]
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Re: Answers to questions not asked
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by Kellros on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 02:58:10 PM AEST
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| I would like a comment or a few, doesn't matter, since most of my poems are written without planning, just thought... a comment would be appreciated, or anything u would want to add ~Kellros~ |
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Re: Answers to questions not asked
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by L-Dee on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 04:55:21 PM AEST
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| Doens't it just suck sometimes. Good poem. |
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Re: Answers to questions not asked
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 09:20:10 PM AEST
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A similar concept a friend once advised me using. He said; "You can't change 'the' world, but you can change 'your' world"
It made me think. Thanks for that. |
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