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Confused and Guessing
Contributed by
zee
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Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 01:32:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Was so weak the love in our heart?
That we moved away and chose to be apart.
Was it me who did something wrong?
Or is it you who cant stand me any long?
Was it the sweetness in the eyes that faded?
Or was it the balance in them that jaded?
Was it the hope in each other that died?
Or was it a joke and we both had lied?
Was it my humor that you couldn’t bear anymore?
Or was it its taste, which you yearned for more?
Was it about my class that you no now know?
Or you find yourself very high and I very low?
Was there something that you hated in me?
Or is there something that you now see in me?
I really can’t make out a reason behind this,
And your silence proves me at fault as it is.
Hell maybe the problem, we could have solved,
Love is all about this, we could have evolved.
I still believe you love and adore me,
My eyes and my heart can betray me.
It’s the time that runs and scares me,
No one could love me more and bear me.
I have said my part and now its up to you,
Please be there for me as I am always there for you!!!
Copyright ©
zee
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2004-02-10 13:32:17]
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Re: Confused and Guessing
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 01:54:50 PM AEST
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Ouch. A difficult struggle. The intense emotion is obvious.
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Re: Confused and Guessing
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 10:46:42 AM AEST
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Aww...that's really a sad write, Zee! But surely written in a good way. Loved reading it! You are getting better for sure!
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Re: Confused and Guessing
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by secretwind on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 01:32:17 AM AEST
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| Deep flow of emotional torture.... |
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