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Love
Contributed by
sexygirl
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Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 06:55:27 AM in AEST
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I melted as he walked by, oh baby baby...
Oh to touch your body would be such a tease....
I wanted your muscular body from a distance oh baby.....
I wanted to undress you, and feel all there is to please....
The pleasures of unbuttoning your shirt one by one....
How exciting this feels to me, I couldn't stop my hands from exploring all those forbidden places...
You'd stand before me with a well exposed tanned body with all your buttons undone...
You kissed me as you unbuttoned my blouse while you caressed my breasts in your embrace.....
Oh baby baby... I ache to touch just one delicious part of you...
With my fingers, with my tongue, God if you only knew....
When I'm with you, you bring me to other places tonight...
Hold me to your body till the night turns into morning light...
Holding me so close to you ,let my wondering hands go to be free...
Ease your burning desires for me, as I hold you close to me...
Tease me for hours, till my body surrenders...
Candles light this room we share on a bed of rose petals....
Smells of massage oils fills our senses and soothes those places so tender....
Shadows of a nice bottle of wine is chilling on the mantle....
Our bodies glistened in the light as our shadows danced on the walls...
I reached for you as your body covered me like a blanket....
Music of hot passion and lust made its' calls.....
With every thrust you made I matched it...
I can hear you breathing sweet nothings in my ears.....
As my heart starts to palpitate like a dove's fluttering wings....
Your intentions were so persevere.......
You can hear morning doves in the distance as they sing...
As I turned to you, and kiss those warm passionate lips....
Your body reponds to my tender butterfly kisses.....
I can feel the passion right down to my finger tips....
This is every girls dreams and wishes......
Our shadows how they moved so gracefully around us....
The candles reflected our movements with such suddle glow...
I leaned into you so close as I nibbled on your exposed skin with such finesse...
Well here we are together in one of the best chateaus....
Is this a dream or is it reality...It's so hard to believe....
How someone can be so in love....
Copyright ©
sexygirl
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2004-02-10 06:55:27]
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Re: Love
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by Jacktripper on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 08:20:35 AM AEST
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| Whew.....Excuse me let me just whipe the sweat off my face. Whew...where do I begin?The descriptions and the passion you explode with is lovely. I felt your emotions as you let them run off in this poetic structure. You've put a twist on block style poetry. I loved it you made the moment with those words. You could do a series out of this and really get creative. Well done I'm sweating right now it was hot. |
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Re: Love
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by 13Hopes on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 08:29:59 AM AEST
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I think my monitor is steaming up, very nice, as for a title, i cant help you...
Cheers,
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Re: Love
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by whisper-of-night on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 10:53:43 AM AEST
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| Well well well welllllll........ one thing I do know is, from now on, I am going to read more of your poems!!! ^_^ |
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Re: Love
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 02:08:23 PM AEST
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I'd call it "Oh...baby!" I think that about says it all. Pant.
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Re: Love
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 09:46:12 PM AEST
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this is beautiful, have you ever decided upon a title? i think if you still want opinions i would have to say you should go with your own wording, "butterfly kisses" for your title, an exquisitly lovely write:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th August 2008 @ 08:11:07 AM AEST
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| you sound like a FAT girl who are disperat to get a hot guy, but irm not interested in a fat ***** |
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