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lub
Contributed by
ZooYork_Chick
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Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 06:04:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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why does it even matter,
because at times we have to try,
i thought that love was easy,
its easier to lie,
no one told me how it would feel,
when your ripped it from my chest,
no one told me how it would feel,
im here with nothing left,
so ill sit here and build a life,
from a pile of broken parts,
im sitting in a puddle,
from my leaking heart
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ZooYork_Chick
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2004-02-10 06:04:49]
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Re: lub
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 06:12:30 AM AEST
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wow the rhymin and the emotion really go hand in hand on this one, its like I'm there lookin through your eyes or readin ur thoughts, an incredible write!
Alec |
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Re: lub
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 06:31:17 AM AEST
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| Wow, emotional write, so full of love and pain...the last verse especially caught my eye, great imagery there. |
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Re: lub
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by cant-skate on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 01:43:31 PM AEST
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| hey gr8 write ! lookin forward to read more from you ! |
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Re: lub
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by whisper-of-night on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 11:09:41 AM AEST
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| Love never easy, but we will not know it until we learn it the hard way! I just hope one day someone would come along, help you rebuild the life and mend your broken heart.... God bless... |
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