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changing shape
Contributed by
rain
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Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 02:31:18 AM in AEST
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Sometimes I see things out of the corner of my eye,
that seem to have a shape, a form I''ve never seen before.
Then when i turn to glance once more and get a better view,
it disapeares as if all alone that had been its plan.
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rain
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2004-02-10 02:31:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: changing shape
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 04:21:37 AM AEST (User
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ohhhhhhh wow said volumes in a small masterpiece
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Re: changing shape
(User Rating: 1 ) by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 06:55:26 AM AEST (User
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Very nice...they say the best presents come in small packages, no? Your poem reminds me of Robert Frost somehow. Nicely done. |
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