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Sanity's Requiem
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 02:12:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Moutains upon mountains of ephemeral displace
And Angels sing funeral hymns
Fountains among fountains of dystopian solace
As moonbeams still sway with the wind
The treading of cool feet against emerald green
A tribute to mystique and ballads of stars
A shimmering sapphire of melodious liquid
When all seems for naught and sweetest tongues taste insipid
The heavens beyond grasp
--so close yet so far--
~from The End of Forever.
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EternitysLyre
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2004-02-10 02:12:43]
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Re: Sanity's Requiem
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 04:08:23 AM AEST
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| That is some absolutely stunning imagery...very breathtaking. Wow! |
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Re: Sanity's Requiem
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 04:23:21 AM AEST
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incredible such an alluring piece of flowing art beautiful! Bravo!
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Re: Sanity's Requiem
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 06:10:30 AM AEST
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Its almost if I was there, incredible (The use of almost mystical colors like sapphire and emerald which are connected to fair tale stories and adventure stories really create this amazing color pallete for the reader to imagine as they read, which ties in with amazing scenery you describe so well)
Great job
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Re: Sanity's Requiem
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 06:47:47 AM AEST
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I am officially jealous of your talent. The way you describe things to the reader, the polish, and the mellifluous rhythm you weave...nothing short of spectacular.
Truly,
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