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this razor
Contributed by
glitter_and_corpsepaint
on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 01:06:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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don't know why i feel this way
emotions die and love decays
try to hold on but i'm swept away
by thoughts of broken yesterdays
tears fall like rain to stain my heart
used up, bled dry, and torn apart
left all alone to face the dark
left all alone to birth new scars
this razor's my saviour
this razor's my friend
fresh blood licked and savored
as i wait for the end
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glitter_and_corpsepaint
... [
2004-02-10 01:06:13]
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Re: this razor
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 04:13:46 AM AEST
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so very sad anything I can do to help?pm me if you would like to chat.
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Re: this razor
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 04:18:32 AM AEST
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this razor's my saviour
this razor's my friend
Sometimes it seems that way, but it's not. |
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Re: this razor
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:11:09 PM AEST
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I agree with the 2nd comment even though I loved this poem. I loved the sort of vampiric element u inserted in the last stanza very creepy I felt.
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