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daddy's mistakes
Contributed by
glitter_and_corpsepaint
on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 12:35:04 AM in AEST
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daddy hates me cuz i'm gay
but daddy's the one who made me this way
late night visits to my bed
as i lay helpless, praying for death
so small
so weak
too scared to speak
can't share the pain i'm forced to bear
night after night
left bleeding
weeping
mommy knows but doesn't care
even now
i'm often afraid
lying in bed
i sob and shake
dreams seem so real
so i stay awake
and regret the mistakes my daddy made
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2004-02-10 00:35:04]
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Re: daddy's mistakes
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 02:26:45 AM AEST
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| Hi there. Nice poem you've written, I'm truly sorry that you had to go through this...you may or may not have gotten over this yet...you show a lot of scars in this poem. Chin up, you've got friends here. PM me if you wanna talk. |
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Re: daddy's mistakes
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 04:15:07 AM AEST
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your pain is clear in this poem Im sorry this has happened to you if needed you can pm me anytime.
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Re: daddy's mistakes
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 06:18:18 AM AEST
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I went through the same kinda thing when I was little, and I'm sorry for you that it happened. Thats the kinda world we live in. Anyway if you wanna talk PM
Great write |
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Re: daddy's mistakes
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:09:21 PM AEST
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this was deep man... I don't know what to say 'cept i hope u aren't writing from personal experience. Very good poem though.
Bobo (Joel) |
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