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Addict
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 11:02:37 PM in AEST
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Every time I try to run
from you I stumble to the
lonesome ground.
Every time I try to turn away
is like having a blade run through me.
Now I know that it's unhealthy
and I know it's not love.
It seems like an addiction...
Yeah, so I guess I'm addicted to you.
So now I hear that you've moved on
and that you're moving away.
Well I guess it's ok 'cause
I've always felt dirty
when I was chained to your side.
Maybe I'll miss you
and maybe I won't.
The only thing I really know
is that I'm still an addict for you.
Raven's Sin
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2004-02-09 23:02:37]
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Re: Addict
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 11:07:29 PM AEST
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Lovely write, Jeff..I can identify....
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Re: Addict
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 11:21:39 PM AEST
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If this was written to a girl I can somewhat relate in any case its a beautiful poem as always.
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Re: Addict
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 12:00:38 AM AEST
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| Such a sad poem but very well written. Kie |
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Re: Addict
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 03:32:16 AM AEST
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great write as always.. this is very sad and leaves you in awe
Peace
JENNA |
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Re: Addict
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 04:33:36 AM AEST
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great job with this one
michelle |
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Re: Addict
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 11:41:19 AM AEST
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wow! amazing poem. i feel the same about someone....except im the one movin. i dont wanna turn away tho, because im addicted...i love your writing....truly amazing
phil xxx |
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Re: Addict
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by Dawny on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 06:22:32 PM AEST
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Really sad, really moving...and really really good, well done
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