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Morn
Contributed by
L-Dee
on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 05:16:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Bitter eyes dry and crack
light disapears, world now black
dust falls upon the ground
silence replaces, the familar sound
Wind strokes one more time
locked in a prison, committed crime
tortued shadow faiding away
been so long forgotton to pray
Ground beneath begins to move
sell of the sweet air, slightly soothes
then nature turns withered and worn
death of our mother humans will morn
Water now tastes, bitterly sour
last breath, this darkened last hour
exsistence of our race disapeared
the destruction that all man feared
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L-Dee
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2004-02-09 17:16:38]
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Re: Morn
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by Putteragain on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 06:18:47 PM AEST
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just want to let you know who read your poem i find dark poetry well dark stupid i know
im just not a dark poet well written and i understand that fear
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Re: Morn
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by arden on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 01:07:37 PM AEST
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i really liked it. i love dark poetry and you write it perfectly.
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