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Imposter
Contributed by
youlied
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Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 05:15:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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My shadow
A mere reflection
A lifeless me
I am followed
I am watched
She sits
She stands
As I do
As I live
My shadow
Copyright ©
youlied
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2004-02-09 17:15:02]
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Re: Imposter
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by L-Dee on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 05:23:37 PM AEST
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| You do not suck, poetry is a way of expressing ones feelings and thoughts. Which you have clearly done. x |
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Re: Imposter
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by neglected1 on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 06:10:48 PM AEST
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you certainly do not suck... give yourself some credit.. there are alot of people that are talented but do not show their works but you , you are talented and arnt afraid to let people know it... i really enjoyed "imposter" keep up the good work!! cant wait to read more from you :)
"too many meanings for one word leave you left with no reason... one meaning for many words leaves you in "aw"." |
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Re: Imposter
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by Ina on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:05:49 AM AEST
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| Interesting...i never thought of a shadow as a SHE I always called it an IT. Nice perspective... |
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Re: Imposter
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by xyberz09 on
Saturday, 9th January 2010 @ 04:18:04 AM AEST
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| A short and sweet poem. Very concise. I like it :) |
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