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Angry as War
Contributed by
youlied
on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 05:11:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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Families are crying
Their loved ones are gone
Taken away by force
Never to return.
Soldiers are screaming
Giving orders
Orders to kill.
The pain is loud
Sounds of sorrow
Enhanced with explosion
An eerie song plays on.
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youlied
... [
2004-02-09 17:11:06] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Angry as War
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lolita on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 04:26:26 PM AEST (User
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That last stanza gives me shivers. Very bold message. Great poem =) |
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