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Tear
Contributed by
L-Dee
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Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 04:28:56 PM in AEST
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As the cold wind blew once more
over the sea, above the shore
I glanced to remember our past
and asked the lord why didn't it last
As I reached out my hand
my tears crashed upon the land
the sea came whisky them away
I fell on two knees, and began to pray
Then I turned began to run
full speed, full speed, the times begun
now your nolonger here
the only rememberance was the tear
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L-Dee
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2004-02-09 16:28:56]
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Re: Tear
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by youlied on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 05:30:57 PM AEST
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| That's beautiful, and so sad too... |
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Re: Tear
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by arden on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 12:51:28 PM AEST
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| that is so sad, the poem was Beautiful. lovely work.<br />
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Arden<br /> |
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