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love- hate
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
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Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 01:13:57 PM in AEST
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I’m staring at these poisoned clouds, searching for the light
And I, god, I wish I could just turn and run
I’ve hidden behind so many crumbling walls, waiting for their inevitable fall
And god, I wish I was special to someone, just one
It’s so lonely inside this self-centred head you made stand alone
And the tears that seep through my eyes are the only ones to tell me I’m alive, that I’m doing fine
But no matter how many names I scream, I’m left to bleed alone
And I die again, with your blood, for the thousandth time
And god, if I could only explain the eternal torment inside my brain
This body that’s grown so cold it’s forgotten how to heal
There’s a million places, a million ways I could have let you into this heart
But I’m so broken and twisted, my eyes have forgotten how to feel
There’s a hundred thousand kisses that I wish so much I could give to you
But every time I try I know it’s another million tears I have to cry
And I’m tired of always crying alone
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Re: love- hate
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by L-Dee on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 04:34:04 PM AEST
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| Excellent poem, I have too felt like this many times, very touching. |
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Re: love- hate
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 05:43:32 PM AEST
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I've read this over and over and over now and i still havent read it enough.. and Lucie it's so beautiful.. and you don't have to bleed alone, you don't have to cry alone.. i'm always here for you darlin.. you're special to me you always have been and always will be, please know that.. i love you so much..
all my heart and hope and love (and a shoulder to cry upon every second of every day),
char xxx |
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Re: love- hate
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 07:45:32 PM AEST
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Yay! Lucie's writing poems again!! :D
Everything you write is amazing, and this is no exception. Beautiful as always!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: love- hate
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 05:29:28 PM AEST
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dearest lucie, this is beautiful as always, your poetry has been missed so much by me, i had to blink twice to see if you had really posted! lol, big hugs, i love you, nessa xxx...
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Re: love- hate
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:14:24 PM AEST
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this was just beauty in its highest forum. However you will ALWAYS be special to me if no one else. You will always be in my heart.
But no matter how many names I scream, I’m left to bleed alone
I loved that line it was just so sad and despairing. I hope that u are doing good however. You can always tell me whats going on. I hope to talk to you soon.
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