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Delusion
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 12:10:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Eternal sin i walk alone
Never calling, never moan
Upon this kiss of deaths embrace
Within this casket, my empty case
Inside a river, i ride illusion
This upon realities confusion
Paradoxical nonsence in literacy form
Like darkness stirring from the everlasting norm
Each step i take, adds a millenium
My mind perplexed at this conundrum
Centuries pass, a step but taken
My mind perplexed, will i awaken?
Castles in the air, im living a revery of life
Full of complexities, of pain and of strife
But this question remains, odd as it seems
Am i dreaming im living, am i living a dream?
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forever_lonely
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2004-02-09 12:10:49]
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Re: Delusion
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 02:27:04 PM AEST
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| this is excellent, from beginning to end, love the images:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Delusion
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by blissfully_fluffi on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 04:39:55 AM AEST
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this is excellent, i too could see where u were going with this.... A great write!
luv No1 |
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Re: Delusion
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 04:54:31 AM AEST
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| Great poem!! :) |
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