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You don't understand
Contributed by
youngpoet1989
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Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 03:04:24 AM in AEST
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I wish you could understand the things
I go through
Instead of being just like you,
I wish you could see it in my eyes
the things i see, hear my lonely cries,
I wish the world would see it my way
Then they'd understand what I say,
Maybe it would be a better place
but it's too bad it's a dream i can't control
but it will all soon erase
And now it's all just a memory I hold
A paper in my hand and all I can see
is it's just a lost written folded memory.
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youngpoet1989
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2004-02-09 03:04:24]
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Re: You don't understand
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 04:11:09 AM AEST
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Well done.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: You don't understand
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by Kie on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 09:28:04 PM AEST
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| A very nice poem. You expressed your feelings well. Kie |
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