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CLOSING OF THE DAY
Contributed by
emystar
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Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 01:45:25 AM in AEST
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oops
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As the sun slowly sets
behold I can see,
Birds sing softly
pearched in the trees.
Children on the streets
playing in holy unity.
Coming to a close,
this new day
Awe, such beauty,
my heart must say.
Thank you for all
that comes my way.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-02-09 01:45:25]
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Re: CLOSING OF THE DAY
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 02:34:50 AM AEST
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Exquisite Delight Emy....something about the end of the day........always gets me right in the heart!
Beautifully written.....I can hear the birdies sing!
love you
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Re: CLOSING OF THE DAY
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by 13Hopes on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 06:02:05 AM AEST
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My Friend,
I love this poem, reminds me of the thoughts i had when my two little people and i fed the ducks together at the pond next to the local library, very similar thoughts.. Thankyou..
Cheers,
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Re: CLOSING OF THE DAY
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by Kie on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 05:22:11 PM AEST
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| I echo everything ConSue said. Beautiful piece Emy, well done! Kie |
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