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A Child Lamb is Sleeping
Contributed by
Valerie_Pearson
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Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 12:10:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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In quiet garden bright beyond,
amidst the grass so soft and sweet,
~~~~ a child lamb is sleeping ~~~~
O' cherished child, in veiled youth,
amidst the night of crossing come,
a slayer lurking in the breath,
using the sword of his smooth tongue,
Hence' her innocence without a stain,
he snatched her veil, the greatest shame,
fierce, cruel and filled of strife,
with his sword he sought her life,
The fate of thee, O' cherished child,
upon a road so cold and dark,
his secret told upon a screen,
a slayer of ruthless heart,
In quiet garden bright beyond,
admidst the grass so soft and sweet,
~~~~ a child lamb is sleeping ~~~~
Written by : Valerie Pearson
copyright2004
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Valerie_Pearson
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2004-02-09 00:10:02]
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Re: A Child Lamb is Sleeping
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 12:51:30 AM AEST
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So sad but beautifully written.
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Re: A Child Lamb is Sleeping
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 12:52:03 AM AEST
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Nice poem,so sad what happened to that little girl.I hope he spends the rest of his days in jail,guilt eating him alive...Like I said,I hope ....How nice of you to have written a poem in memory of her.Much hugs,
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Re: A Child Lamb is Sleeping
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by Dark_Angel on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 03:20:49 AM AEST
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| a beautiful dedication. heart-shredding as it is. superbly written. |
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Re: A Child Lamb is Sleeping
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by venkat on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 03:27:15 AM AEST
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| Ooh..murder of a child lamb by a ruthless heart..soo sad.. beautifully written. venkat |
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Re: A Child Lamb is Sleeping
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 07:49:49 PM AEST
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It is hard to understand why God lets demons like this walk the earth. The loss of a child is hard enough, but to know they suffered so is unbearable for the ones that loved her. The fires of Hell will be his eternal salvation. Beautifully penned although heartbreaking.
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Re: A Child Lamb is Sleeping
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 08:41:13 AM AEST
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| OMG This was so sad I cant believe this stuff happens & we have to be left to deal with this ! God Bless! Christina |
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Re: A Child Lamb is Sleeping
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 12:31:24 PM AEST
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very very sad val, i remember when you told me about her, this is a beautiful dedication, hugs n' loves ya nessa x
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