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So far away (from good)
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 11:59:00 PM in AEST
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I know I'll never know
why you couldn't stand
to stay with me.
I'd given you all I
had to give.
Well I guess I'll
never know where
that girl I loved more
than my very life went.
You said so many times
that we'd be forever.
So I guess I'll never
know why I'm standing
here alone in this
freezing rain and moonless sky
with tears streaming down my face.
Won't somebody please
help me out of this place.
Show me a way out
to something thats better.
How did I get to be here
so far away from your love.
Well I guess I'll never know...
Raven's Sin
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2004-02-08 23:59:00]
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Re: So far away (from good)
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 12:10:01 AM AEST
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Sad but definetly a work of art!
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs,
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Re: So far away (from good)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 01:16:11 AM AEST
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"I wanna get outta this place...if it's the last thing I ever do"...You're probably too young to recognize those lyrics...the best way is to get back on the horse and ride again...I know, you feel like a fighter that's down and you don't want to get punched again...fight that feeling.
I loved that poem...it flows nicely, you write beautifully.
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Re: So far away (from good)
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by 13Hopes on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 06:15:25 AM AEST
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The only way to move forward is to get up one more time than you fall down... Great poem.. Love hurts sometimes..
Cheers,
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Re: So far away (from good)
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by Mad-Mancunian on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 11:18:52 AM AEST
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| If you love, deeply, without expecting anything in return, then you are indeed saved. A conscientious mind is the most powerful of God's miracles. |
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