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Dead...
Contributed by
intelectualpoet
on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 11:07:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Dead
My heart continues to beat steadily,
But it no longer serves it original purpose.
My blows flows through my life-less body,
Like the oil in the engine,
Of the car I'm driving through the rain tonight.
My eyes fixed upon the distance,
As if I may never see it again.
I close my eyes,
No longer do I live in fear.
Death doesn't scare me anymore,
It's the only thing that can rid me,
Rid me of the pain I feel inside my body, my veins.
I want nothing more than to leave this world,
The world of pain and starvation behind,
And spend eternity with you, where ever you are.
Can you hear me??
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intelectualpoet
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2004-02-08 23:07:32]
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Re: Dead...
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 11:40:57 PM AEST
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SAd but VERY THOUGHT PROVOKING.
Written like a pro.
Great job!
huggs, luv,
emy
hanng tuff |
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Re: Dead...
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by emphaticplacebo on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 11:28:05 AM AEST
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| Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it. You a quite good at describing things in detail and I applaud you for that. |
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Re: Dead...
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 03:38:21 AM AEST
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| Wow, that was just beautiful. I loved the last line, I can really feel the longing in it. What a masterpiece. |
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Re: Dead...
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by poet_of_anger on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 11:16:42 PM AEST
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| Great, i love the way that this moves, progressing and dragging the reader, me, in, and there are countless times when i have felt the same. Good Job. |
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