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Blinded
Contributed by
Aaralyn
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Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 11:06:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Blinded
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The sound of your voice
Drives me crazy!
Being without you
Is something I though I'd never have to do.
I looked up to you.
You were my vision of perfection.
My best friend,
But now it is the end.
You used to play the part very well.
We had a picture perfect friendship.
It all unfolded to have been fake
You make it seem so easy for me to be replaced!
No one knows how close we were
Now I don't think I even do
To now know your intensions,
Did I even really know you?
I realize now that I was blinded.
I've always meant nothing to you!
I tried so hard not to believe it,
I'm no longer blinded, now I can see it!
Copyright ©
Aaralyn
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2004-02-08 23:06:24]
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Re: Blinded
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by poetrygodslove on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 09:01:33 PM AEST
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| another good one. so much of my feelings about my friend. liked how you wrote all of your poems. my type of poetry. keep them coming. sandy |
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Re: Blinded
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by venkat on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:32:46 AM AEST
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| Expressed very well..venkat |
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