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all that i am
Contributed by
Shadow
on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 08:56:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A little bit of what I am
What you always try to damn
You hate the way I try live
This is all I have to give
So sick of the b/s you try to pull
Let’s have it out one last duel
You want to fight this all I got
This what I am every thing your not
Chorus: I so sick of this! Time to fight
Let’s end this now this very night
You hate all I am
Am I the one you want to damn?
End Chorus
So this is what it comes down to
This is all your going to do
Like I said this is what I’ve got
Here I am everything you not
Chorus repeats
This is were my hell ends
This sad tell where you life bends
This is everything you’ve got
You’re everything that I am not.
Copyright ©
Shadow
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2004-02-08 20:56:42]
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Re: all that i am
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by outdoorsman on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 09:10:24 PM AEST
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| I like it a lot. "You hate all I am, Am I the one you want to damn?" Strong words that everyone can identify with. |
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Re: all that i am
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by Jolly on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 11:59:09 AM AEST
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| It always helps me with lyrics If I can catch a beat in my head....this is good, and I like the words. I'm a baby boomer (I guess)...I like Rod Stewart, Celine Dion, my taste is eclectic...I don't care for rap, heavy metal...I like some country, but it always makes me cry...but I recently met someone that wants to take me to an Oz fest....Oh God...my son who is 35 likes "the Oz Man...we might all go together...I'll wear ear plugs and paste a smile on my face...is that hard enough????? |
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Re: all that i am
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 10:14:14 PM AEST
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| can hear the loud music pounding in my head, i like how your ending switches around too, ~from the me to the you, clever, hugs n' love nessa |
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