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Pain Is Living
Contributed by
outdoorsman
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Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 04:44:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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uncertainty has chased away my smiles
with an undying stride, she trails my every mile
clutching every emotion that I ever knew
making certainty a riddle with no clue
remind me of a time when everything was bright
and pain was deeply hidden from sight
the threat of anguish became so real
there really is a point when we no longer feel
thief in a night that stripped me bare
took away all that mattered, all I care
the path split and I was pushed through
no choice, no chance, no you
planted feet on falling ground
alive in a world with no sound
the same way that a drop of blood scatters from it's objective
I saw my goals and found myself reflective
of a time when I was oblivious
and helter skelter was anything but obvious
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2004-02-08 16:44:50]
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Re: Pain Is Living
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by Angelchild on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 04:50:57 PM AEST
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life isn't easy, but some people have their ways of letting out their pain. this is a good way to do it.
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Re: Pain Is Living
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 03:48:39 PM AEST
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| This one is so sad but remarkably written. The end line was perfect. Kie |
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