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Silver Flash
Contributed by
outdoorsman
on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 04:28:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Stars streak across midnight's sky
A silver flash down below
Blade running through the future
Across and through the river of life
Currents of a soul pour out
Onto the ground they wander lost
Confusion sets in once more
Upon the doorstep of freedom
Knocking at the doors of redemption
When the last drop finds the floor
I'll pray to be greeted with a smile
In a happy place for now
The world is obsolete
Like God, I have created a new world
Fate is what we make
Life is what we take
Copyright ©
outdoorsman
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2004-02-08 16:28:43]
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Re: Silver Flash
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 05:35:29 PM AEST
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| great poem keep up writting. |
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Re: Silver Flash
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 08:40:52 PM AEST
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Very interesting... I loved the last line so true. I believe I will find myself coming back to read more of yer stuff.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Silver Flash
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by Barky on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 10:16:13 PM AEST
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| gorgeous, very symbolic and yet it gives me hope more than makes me sad. very nice rythem and word choice, ill be watching ~_^ |
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