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The Obsurdity Of Regret
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 04:06:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You
Misery loses context with every word
I sit in shadows waiting for hope to break in
And smiling seems so obsurd
We
Sorrow gains its motion with gravity
Keeps happy at bay with the utmost contempt
I sit here waiting, so heavy
I
Useless as the tongue so soft spoken
Darkness folds around me, useless
On my knees with my will so broken
You
Couldn't hear my each and every word
Regret folds into forget as you run faster
And chasing you seems so obsurd
We
Meaningless plans
Razor-tipped hurtfuls
Bleeding hands
I
Losing hope as I lose the light of day
You run so much faster than I do
And we both forget what I had to say
It's okay
Congratulations to your superiority
And welcome to your land of regret
I wish you could see how wonderful life could be
And I wish you chose not to forget
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Exodus-On-Life
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Re: The Obsurdity Of Regret
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 04:26:39 PM AEST
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Oh my! Deep and pawerful poem! Loved its style, its very dark and the wording is very touching. I really loved it! I could relate to most of it wow .......
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Re: The Obsurdity Of Regret
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by L-Dee on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 04:40:13 PM AEST
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| Excellent poem. |
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Re: The Obsurdity Of Regret
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 08:39:33 PM AEST
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Useless as the tongue so soft spoken
Darkness folds around me, useless
On my knees with my will so broken
I loved that stanza as I did the whole poem it was all so well said. I love how it all just rolled off my tongue very dark, yet beautiful at the same time. I can't say enough.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: The Obsurdity Of Regret
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by outdoorsman on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 09:24:11 PM AEST
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| this is my kind of poem. seems to be straight from my heart. i enjoyed reading this. |
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