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Support
Contributed by
L-Dee
on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 09:34:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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When your feeling, lonely and sad
think of good times, I am sure you've had
when life seems a struggle all the way
i'll be there to brighten up your day
As darkness approaches over your soul
take a large step, over that hole
pressures arrise, breaking you mind
remember your special, one of a kind
If someone crumples, destroys your heart
be strong minded, don't fall apart
when you're reduced to floods of tears
i will be there to remove those fears
Copyright ©
L-Dee
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2004-02-08 09:34:21]
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Re: Support
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 09:40:55 AM AEST
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This is a very beautiful poem, I've enjoyed reading it. I especially like the last paragraph.
Please return the favor and read some of mine. thanks
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Re: Support
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by mercedes on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 01:14:03 PM AEST
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| Very good write. Nice to know some people can still show that kind of support. |
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Re: Support
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by Trhpeanut on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 01:56:21 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem. nice use of words. keep up the good work. |
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Re: Support
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:51:25 PM AEST
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This is really very lovely..
Jenni |
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