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It Scares Me.
Contributed by
blindcause
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Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 07:06:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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It scares me to know that you could go,
In the darkness of night,
In the blink of an eye,
I shalt not know your friendship.
With out your love I am nothing,
Should you go, I shalt surely follow,
If only to see your shadow.
Should I stay, I shalt not know,
Should I go, I shalt surely follow,
Either way I lose how can i choose?
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Re: It Scares Me.
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 07:19:26 AM AEST
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| it dosent make sence but that is only my opnion, anyways a poem isnt about making sence to everyone its about your feelings and emotions, i like the "shalt" bits in it, it gives it an intreasting twist and makes it seem not to simple. i think you've got a really intreasting talent... |
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Re: It Scares Me.
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 07:19:44 AM AEST
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| this is good! very sad though... |
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Re: It Scares Me.
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by 13Hopes on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 08:07:47 AM AEST
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I think you did quite well.... Well done....
Its not an easy choice, and never is....
Cheers,
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Re: It Scares Me.
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by 13Hopes on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 10:48:49 AM AEST
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| PLease, check you private message... |
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Re: It Scares Me.
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by mercedes on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 01:24:12 PM AEST
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| Thats never an easy choice and you described it well. By the way, welcome to the site. |
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Re: It Scares Me.
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 08:57:48 AM AEST
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Nicely done....
Welcome to YPDC...the best site on the net..
Jenni |
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