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Love Of The Air
Contributed by
jbrow
on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 04:58:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Love is an ocean, and love is a sea, So let it flow baby from you unto
me. love is so hot, and love is so cold. Love is one thing that you or I can’t
hold. You can feel it, but you can’t see it. As quick as it comes it disappears.
That why I call it love of the air.
Love is a game of give, and of take, so my baby don’t let my heart
break. Love is like a drop of morning dew. Here in the morning but gone by
afternoon. love is so hot, and love is so cold. Love is one thing that you or I
can’t hold. You can feel it, but you can’t see it. As quick as it comes it
disappears. That why I call it love of the air.
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jbrow
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2004-02-08 04:58:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love Of The Air
(User Rating: 1 ) by neglected1 on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 06:14:42 PM AEST (User
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Wow... i kind of find it hard to believe that you nailed it that well... great job,.. great wording and reasons.. keep up the good work..
i dont understand why noone else has commented on your poem.. i found it excellent!! |
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