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Mother
Contributed by
L-Dee
on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 04:52:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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On my own in this world
darkness fills the sky
praying for a new change
asking her why?
The answers are here
I've been cruel, so unkind
mother nature got revenge
taking over my mind
What shall I do?
fight my own mother
woman who created me
stronger being than any other
Sit down, give in?
tell the priest at confession
must listen to her though
must learn from the lesson
Concentrate on the advice
stop thinking so strong
mother was right
it is me in the wrong
Copyright ©
L-Dee
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2004-02-08 04:52:59]
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Re: Mother
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by mercedes on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 01:18:31 PM AEST
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| It didn't go the way i thought it would when i first read it. It did get me thinking. good job |
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Re: Mother
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:33:31 PM AEST
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They usually are....well..most of the times....
Good write.
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