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Drowning In You
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 04:30:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Wallowing in self-pity
Drowning in self-doubt
These feelings are over-whelming
And I can't seem to find a way out
I'm sick of waking up early
And staying up so late
It's the sickness that binds me
I wish you could relate
The constant fear of disaster
The lonesome need for you
I wish something could make me better
Make me feel the way you used to
It's closing on me faster
And I'm wallowing all day
I'm drowning all over again
I wish you would stay
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Re: Drowning In You
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 05:58:15 AM AEST (User
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Awesome write ... I relate to this so well ... couldn't have said it better ... Jan |
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Re: Drowning In You
(User Rating: 1 ) by L-Dee on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 09:06:21 AM AEST (User
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I can truely relate, the useage of words make it easy follow. Very good piece of following poetry. |
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