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Empty Well
Contributed by
remy
on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 01:30:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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take a look up in my eyes
it's no surpsise
that each day feels just like a night
where i want to die and you wonder why.
so you ask all the questions
spark off conversation
while southbound suggestions
brings on more frustration
yes through and through you do.
no more left from me to you.
so well oh well this well the well
echoes deep...
what am i supposed to say
just like yesterday
i'm in the breed of fading accolades
it's a stupid grade that i've made.
so pointless but oh well
i've run hit more fails
disjointed as show tell
recorded as short tales
yes through and through you do
you choose it for your venue
housing ties and links so few
no more left from me to you.
so well oh well this well the well
echoes deep...
the well
deep...
and as stupid as it sounds
i keep throwing off my crowns
instinct...
tells me it's better found.
and i'll earn my way up top
right before i falter drop
and each time, each time
i'll go my way okay...
Copyright ©
remy
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2004-02-08 01:30:23]
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Re: Empty Well
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by shelby on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:24:57 AM AEST
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this sat me back in my chair!
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Re: Empty Well
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by slayer_015 on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 04:05:20 AM AEST
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Shows a great deal of emotion,great job.
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Re: Empty Well
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 10:46:15 AM AEST
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| GOSH REMY YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER THIS REALLY TAKES MY BREATH AWAY- I CAN SURELY RELATE |
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