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Blood Stains
Contributed by
jazz
on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 12:01:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I took off the necklace, and put it in the drawer.
I crept over to the closet, and opened the door.
I took out my clothes, and piled them into the case.
My eyes never leaving your handsome face.
You looked so peaceful, so serene and calm.
I knew that leaving was best. I had to be strong.
I finished all the packing, then sat down on the bed.
Thoughts just crept up, and crowded my head.
I remembered the night, I caught you and that girl.
You shattered my dreams, and crumbled my world.
I was faithful to you, through everything.
And pain and heartbreak, was all you could bring.
I knew, though, it was just a matter of time.
I would not let go that easy, I would get mine.
She was so pretty, too. I almost thought twice.
But it felt good, when I plunged that knife.
She pleaded with me, tried to make a deal.
I was her nightmare, and her soul I was to steal.
Now you, on the other hand, I knew you would run.
You could have run all you want, then I would have fun.
There was no where to go, and no where to hide.
Then you tripped and fell, and I was right by your side.
I cuddled you in my arms, like we lovers again.
And then I pulled out the blade, and let your life end.
One slash across your throat, and life was altered with time.
I had no regrets, you had your fun, and I had mine.
By the time they find you, I will be far off in some distant lands.
But I will smile every time, I see the blood stains on my hands.
Copyright ©
jazz
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2004-02-08 00:01:58]
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Re: Blood Stains
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 01:49:24 AM AEST
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this was awesome very dark and great. I loved the image of u seeing yer blood-stained hands that was terrific. Awesome write!
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Re: Blood Stains
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by CuttersAngel on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:43:12 AM AEST
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if only words could say the greatness of this poem.... i loved it and it made me laugh...great job
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