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Letting go
Contributed by
booboo
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Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 11:18:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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just a few lines to tell you how i feel,
a few linesto show i care
but what good wii thes lines do
if you're never there?
These words will just be written
never noticed or read
all my feelings down on paper
all the thoughts that will fill my head
whispered softly to myself
so no one else can hear
only i can see whats written
only i can feel my tears
shutting out the world around me
only i canhear my cries
writing my feelings down on paper
my heat starts to die
i'm dying inside
but no one seems to care
i'm trying to hold on
but i'm slowly letting go
Copyright ©
booboo
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2004-02-07 23:18:25]
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Re: Letting go
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by mercedes on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 12:57:57 AM AEST
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| Your words were noticed and read. Such a sad write, you express yourself well. |
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Re: Letting go
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 01:23:31 AM AEST
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Sad but so lovely...
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Re: Letting go
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by shelby on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:29:29 AM AEST
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this was noticed and Im sorry for your pain a lovely poem but so sad.
Michelle |
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Re: Letting go
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 04:44:28 PM AEST
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So sad! This poem transfers very deep emotion, wonderfully written. Don't give up you are a great poet!
Anne :D |
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