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~he found her in the flowers ~w moral
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 08:44:59 PM in AEST
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he found her in the flowers
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*she was as patient as a monument*
Exclaimed the Caterpillar,
"But he doesn't listen to me at all!"
Answered the Mongoose before he devoured her,
"Why should he when you're at his beck and call?"
~caterpillar: symbolizes love
~'he doesn't listen'--> (her love)
~mongoose: represents life
~*my note: -*she was as patient as a monument*-:
love was waiting, patiently whilst life passed by; love was unattended, love was not given its wings, so wasted away to nothingness,
~flowers: when you die you symbolically go back to the earth and flowers.
*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*
~MORAL:
given not its wings; love unattended is consumed by life.
*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*
*special hugs, love n' recognition to yodo and Necromant who gave so much effort and thought to my meaning and symbolism warming my heart:) xxx...
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Re: ~he found her in the flowers ~w moral
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by Stalkee on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 08:47:09 PM AEST
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| ahh, i see...=) good job, you stumped us all lol |
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Re: ~he found her in the flowers ~w moral
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 09:38:27 PM AEST
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| Oh beautiful Lady Caterpillar, I see you found your wings, life sometimes seems gray as granite, but love will make you sing, Love ya Val ( Surrender, just surrender) |
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Re: ~he found her in the flowers ~w moral
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by Kie on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 09:49:55 PM AEST
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| Bravo! Bravo! I can't wait to read your next submission. Kie |
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Re: ~he found her in the flowers ~w moral
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by Merry on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 09:50:03 PM AEST
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my dearest nessa - so glad you explained this one - good heavens I had it all twisted round.
ignore love, pass it by? only a fool would do a thing like that. sometimes fools need a good smack upside the head.....heheehe well it might work.
hugs
merry
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Re: ~he found her in the flowers ~w moral
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by emystar on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 11:12:25 PM AEST
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Very unique, so true.
Great one here.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: ~he found her in the flowers ~w moral
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by Jazz on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 11:56:55 PM AEST
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This was definitely cute and well though out. Love is so fickle. It can bring you up, but then it lets you fall. Of course, that is a risk we all take. It can only wait so long, like your poem says, and then it's gone...
Take it when you can get it!
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Re: ~he found her in the flowers ~w moral
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by lonesomerose on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 12:21:09 AM AEST
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so talented and creative you are Nessa
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Re: ~he found her in the flowers ~w moral
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 08:14:37 PM AEST
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| You did a great job Nessa. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: ~he found her in the flowers ~w moral
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by colinb on
Sunday, 1st June 2014 @ 04:30:38 PM AEST
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| very creative i love this poem |
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