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My Final Plea
Contributed by
Tanna
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Friday, 6th September 2002 @ 06:36:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Leaving me behind, you're backing away
You outgrow your need for me, a little every day
When I try to talk to you, you say there's nothing wrong
But this feeling is overwhelming - so strong
This thought overpowers me with its might
For my intuition is usually right
Your words at times vague, not always clear to me
All I ask for is honesty, can't you see?
I love you enough not to hold you back
What you need is something that I obviously lack
Things have changed, you can't deny
Don't insult my intelligence, it only makes me cry
I wish you'd open up, to help me understand
I realize that things rarely work out as planned
I'm not stupid, and I'm not blind
We can pretend otherwise, but you're leaving me behind
The truth is usually painful, but with this I will contend
My heart is breaking, but supposedly "it will mend"
Life's never been easy for you - always rough
You've had dismay and disappointment, more than enough
The years I have known you, I've watched you mature
Mentally you've grown so much, but you remain unsure
You've helped mend my soul, like no one in my past
The love I feel for you remains intense, vast
Of your quest for inner peace I will never stand in your way
My love will remain steady - don't dismay
What I want for you is only the best
To find someone like you, I've truly been blessed
You don't give yourself credit for the man who's inside
You've thought you're "Not Good Enough", the real "You" has been denied
Inner growth, my dear, you cannot subdue
Slay your inner demons, to thine own heart be true
I will always be here for you - of that do not doubt
No matter the outcome, my friendship remains devout
Tell me your inner thoughts, help me to see
It's my only request, it's my final plea.
Copyright ©
Tanna
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2002-09-06 06:36:19]
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Re: My Final Plea
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 6th September 2002 @ 06:42:54 AM AEST
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| Tanna, you have a gift, it will return, and when it does, you will blossom |
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Re: My Final Plea
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by Chrissylee on
Friday, 6th September 2002 @ 08:20:28 AM AEST
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| I agree whole heartedly here with Valerie, you do have the gift to write from the heart. I hope you consider to just take a break and to return soon |
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Re: My Final Plea
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th September 2002 @ 02:40:23 PM AEST
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Nice job hun.
-Tj |
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Re: My Final Plea
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 07:01:36 AM AEST
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| "to thine own heart be true " this is a very good peom, it shows a part of life that none of the others do, the embers of the fire. |
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