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Forget Me
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 08:19:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Unsolicited
advice elicited,
you've found my ears
turned inside out --
around my years
you wander.
You try to find
the real me --
while left behind,
you feel me;
...a bloody mist I once sojourned...
And now you think you've earned
a reason for my love??
...not this season,
fleeting dove,
my corpse has laid to rest.
While as still you search and scrape
for my unwanted rape.
The birch grows ghostly through the fog --
Forget me.
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2004-02-07 20:19:48]
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Re: Forget Me
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 08:30:47 PM AEST
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wow this was awesome man, very poetic.
...a bloody mist I once sojourned...
I loved that line.
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Re: Forget Me
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 10:44:15 PM AEST
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Ooooh, I like . . . that wonderful lilting rhyme scheme of yours really is at its best in ones like these. Love the images you're painting. Not bad, overall, not bad at all.
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